Feedback from 2001 Presentation

• Like the style of the poster but feel as though larger text would be more informative - could be faded/distorted to match the aesthetic.

I agree with the text being too small, this would be something to alter if producing the poster again. Fading the text would definitely be something to consider, wouldn't be as distracting, but then could potentially become too faded and not easy to read. Reduce the effectiveness of the poster.

• Black on black is really inventive.
• What materials are the tickets printed on? Could try have tickets on acetate. 

The tickets would be printed onto think black card, this is to communicate the nonexistence theme running throughout the film, so the information is there but also kind of not. The acetate could work for this as it would make the ticket seem as though it isn't there, would definitely be something to test with if we could progress this project further.

• Could have explained film plot and aesthetic more to help audience understand.

Something to improve on for projects int he future when doing presentations.

• The distorted text is really visually effective.
• What inspired the broke up type?

Made during the collage workshop, thinking of interesting ways to develop the type so it isn't just slapped on the poster. The distorted type was made by one of my group members, we felt it fit the space theme as well. 

• Clear development work - details were clearly informed by good research and clear links to the film. 
• Really like your use of animation - link well to the film.
• Really like the idea of an immersive experience - old tv is a really fun idea.
• Why put screening in a corner? Why use old TV?

We wanted the experience to be as immersive as possible, the idea of having everything going into a corner would highten this experience. The old tv was to pay a little homage to the time of the film, and HAL 9000 is an AI who looks like a thinner TV, so the aesthetic felt suitable for the screening.

• It's like an installation piece which i think is interesting and unique compared to the other screenings.
• Poster and ticket designs are quite hard to link together. Not as cohesive. 

I agree with this critique, as a group we discussed ways of making the poster and ticket worm together, we decided to keep the poster in black and white to keep the colour scheme cohesive, as well as using Helvetica for the type. 

One way we discussed making the poster and ticket have the same feel was to change the type in the middle of the poster to be the same as the poster, all distorted and chopped up; however we felt it could end up being too difficult to read as the ticket was black ink on black paper and the audience might end up struggling. 

• Instagram is aesthetically powerful, a little less powerful than the intense screening but does bring balance to the entire concept.